宝鸡市高三英语二检书面表达试题、答卷分析及备考建议。
一名优秀的教师在每次教学前有自己的事先计划，作为教师就要好好准备好一份教案课件。教案可以让上课时的教学氛围非常活跃，帮助教师提前熟悉所教学的内容。那么一篇好的教案要怎么才能写好呢？下面是小编精心收集整理，为您带来的《宝鸡市高三英语二检书面表达试题、答卷分析及备考建议》，大家不妨来参考。希望您能喜欢！<JAb88.COM/p>宝鸡市高三英语二检书面表达试题、答卷分析及备考建议
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3月9日、10日如期进行了宝鸡市高三第二次质量检验。本次命题严格执行了陕西省高考大纲要求，试卷在考察学生英语语言知识和技能的同时，侧重考察学生综合运用语言，获取信息，分析问题和解决问题的能力。本套试题有较高的信度和效度，难度适当，且区分度较好。
现就书面表达对学生答题情况进行分析。
一.命题类型、题材
此次书面表达要求根据所提供的一组常见的浪费粮食的图画及所附数据，写一封倡议人们节约粮食，参加“光盘行动”的倡议信。题材紧扣热点话题，贴近学生生活实际，有时代气息，要点提示得当，难度适中。
二.在批改试卷中，所见高分作文并不多，学生普遍存在以下薄弱环节：
1、审题不细致，文章逻辑混乱。
仔细观察图画，由两张配有数据的照片（国外及国内）和两幅配有文字说明的漫画组成。显然提供国内外照片及数据的目的是为了对比。由此，下笔应先从描述说明国内浪费粮食情况和世界粮食匮乏的现状对比出着手。接着，在对比基础上，根据漫画所配文字说明，提出倡议，节约粮食，加入“光盘行动”，这样，条理清楚，一模了然。整个批改过程中，学生普遍都缺乏条理，逻辑顺序不明显。画面内容和议论倡议部分不能做到黄金分割。要么画面内容描写过多，倡议部分一笔带过，安心描述画面内容过于简单，而倡议部分则泛泛而谈。这种情况是由于没有仔细深入审题造成的。
2、语法使用不准确，句型不能灵活运用。
语言以准确性是写作中不可忽视的重要方面，因为它直接或间接地影响到信息的准确传输。应用语法结构和词汇的准确程度是写作部分评分标准中的一项重要内容，很多学生写出了许多面目全非的句子。如：Wedon’twasting;Canwewasting?;Myideaiseveryonejoininclear-your-plateconyxugn.类似的错误还很多，很多。显然，产生这些错误的原因是语言的功底不够，语言表达能力还需好好练习。学生平时也背诵了大量的范文和典型句式，但是不能恰当自如的运用，不能将典型句式内化为自己的句子，比如我们平时背短语appealtosbtodosth,但在写“我们呼吁同学们快来加入光盘行动中”这样的句子时，就想不到要用appealto这个词，不能写出“Iappealtoeveryschoolmatetojoinintheclear-your-platecompaignandeatupallthefoodontheplate”这样的句子。
总之，准确的表达是必须的。不能盲目地追求高难及语法，华丽的词汇，我们首先要确保单词的准确性，要学会将基础词汇、高频词汇和难记词汇合理搭配；杜绝一味的单调性。我们要注意基础语法的使用，将简单句、复合句以及适当的定语从句和状语从句搭配应用，这样才能彰显语言运用的能力。
3、数字表达混乱
图表类作文常会有数据说明。例如：百分之二十写作20percent;二分之一写作onehalf;五分之二写作two-fifths;百万写作million，而十亿写作billion。本次考试中出现的500亿公斤，很少有学生能正确表达（50billionkilos），20亿人写作0.2billionpelope。这些问题反映了学生基本功还需夯实，也提醒我们教师今后还需多强调与数字有关的年代，日期，时间的表示方法。
4、书写不规范
许多学生书写不规范，严重影响了真实写作水平的表现，着实令人遗憾。书面表达应力求用词准确，完成后应认真阅读，检查文章中的拼写，标点，大小写，语法逻辑是否有错误。检查词数是否符合要求，内容是否全面，删繁就简，使表达更加精炼，措辞更加恰当。书写要规范、正确、美观，并保持卷面整洁。在今后所剩不多的时间里，要重点强调书写，让学生养成书写工整，规范，卷面整洁的习惯，高考时才不至于书写缭乱，卷面不整洁，从而避免丢掉本来不该丢的分。
三、后期复习写作训练建议
书面表达强调语言的交流性，时代性和开放性。我们应加强对现实生活的关注，作文要切题，紧扣中心，不漏要点，意思连贯，文理通顺，语言准确，得当。
二卷的确是提高成绩的关键。它能较好地考查学生的解题规范和人文素养，反映考生的学习、答题的习惯。应将改错与书面表达的训练同步进行，在抓好基础（包括五个基本句型和it，therebe句型以及常用过渡词and,but,so,then,first,atlast等的正确运用），强化解题规范（包括改错题的通读，具体语境中的语法结构分析；书面表达题的审题，勾勒要点，选词造句，连句成篇等），培养良好解题习惯的同时（包括指令符号，大小写，标点符号的正确运用，书写工整规范和控制字数等），还应鼓励指导学生大胆使用高级词汇和复杂句型，力求用纯正地道的语言表达文章意思，避免因随意或畏缩而影响主观题的得分。
四、给同学们的建议
书面表达要求考生在限定的时间内根据所提示的内容要求，用英文写出一篇字数为100～120字的短文，是对学生综合运用语言能力的一种考查方式，要写好这篇短文，一般来讲需分四个步骤：
1、确定文章体裁
写作前，首先认真审查，看文章题目要求是哪种文体，书面通知，日记，书信，还是看图写话，不同的文体有不同的格式。
2、选择准确的词汇和短语
确定文体后，要把短文的内容提示用准确的词汇短语写出来，可以避免遗漏要点。
3、连词成句
将已选好的单词和短语根据题目的提示用适当的联词连成句子，注意短文的人称、时态、动词变形、名词复数是否运用正确。
4、栓查语言
短文写完后，一定要反复研读，注意修改文章出现的语法错误，如人称用错，时态，动词及习语搭配等等错误。
书面表达所需要的时间大约是20-25分钟，建设同学们每周选择一至二个体裁的短文进行自我训练，并与参考译文进对比，看看自己文章中的要点是否齐全，短文运用是否恰当，并有针对性的记忆一些参考译文中的句子，好短语，只要坚持写字作，不断修改，写作能力会是益加强。
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一、省质检地理试题分析
1、对地理知识点的考查
⑴、选择题共11题44分，依次考查了以下知识点
水资源（8分）、自然带（4分）、工业区位因素（4分）、气候（气温）及影响因素(8分)、区域定位（2分）与农业生产（6分）、日照图（6分）及时间的换算（2分）、综合(4分)。
⑵、综合题共8小题56分，依次考查了以下内容
地形区及成因（8分）、交通、自然灾害（12分）、等值线(等日照时数)的分布特点及影响因素(6分)、产业结构的特点及成因分析(10分)、重要地理事物的名称(4分)、河流水文特征及成因分析(8分)、人口问题及原因分析(8分)。
⑶、全卷考查的地理知识点覆盖面广、比例适当
①整份试卷涉及到的大小知识点较多(见第⑴、⑵点分析)。侧重于考查高中地理的主干知识，一些历年高考考查的重点知识所占的比重较高，如等值线图、时间换算、气候、地形、水文、自然资源和自然灾害、农业和工业，占了全卷的86%。因此这份试卷对学生地理知识点掌握情况的考查，具有较高的参考价值。
②整份试卷自然地理与人文地理、中国地理与世界地理的分值大致相当，总体比例适当。
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本文题目：高三英语复习教案：英语书面表达复习教案
出台的背景● 连续的事故;
● 社会的关注;
● 政府的重视;
……
出台的意义● 关爱生命;
● 稳定社会;
……
你的看法(请考生根据自己的感想提出两至三点建议)
注意：
1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不能简单翻译。
2.词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
Legal Affairs Office of the State Council of China publicized the exposure draft of School Bus Safety Regulations on Dec. 11th, 2011 to collect public opinions. ______________________
___--- ___________
One possible version:
Legal Affairs Office of the State Council of China publicized the exposure draft of School Bus Safety Regulations on Dec. 12th, 2011 to collect public opinions.
During the past year, there have been several severe school bus accidents which claimed many young lives. These tragedies came as a shock to everyone, and they have aroused great concern among people from all walks of life. The publication of the draft regulations indicate that our government has realized how serious the situation is and that it is taking effective measures to ensure the safety of the school bus.
The draft regulations reflect a deep concern from our government as well as from the public about students’ lives. When put into effect, the regulations will surely help reduce the number of accidents and benefit schools and families as well. Also, they will be of vital importance in stabling the society.
Personally, I fully support the coming out of the regulations, and I sincerely hope that everyone in our society will obey the regulations. What’s more, the regulations should be strictly carried out. (153 words)
2.
【2012厦门质检】
【题目要求】
下面这幅图展现了小明在放学路上因公交车故障欲向路人借手机联系父母的情景。请根据你对这幅图的理解用英语写一篇短文向《中学生英文报·会热点栏目》投稿。
1.简要描述图片内容;
2.结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想。
注意：
1.可根据图片提示及内容要点进行适当发挥;
2.词数120左右。开头己经写好，不计入总词数。
【参考范文】 3.
【2012三明市联考】这幅漫画表现了高校考研大军为备战研究生考试去图书馆占座位的情形，据中国日报报道，今年研究生报考人数突破160万人， 再创历史新高，请写一篇英语短文，试分析促使越来越多大学毕业生选择考研的原因。
注意：1. 130词左右，开头已给，不计入总词数。
2. 注意语言的得体性、准确性、和连贯性。
参考词汇：job seekers求职者;
professional skills专业技能;
fierce competition激烈的竞争
【参考范文】
It’s reported in China Daily that more than 1.6 million people took the post-graduate entrance exam this year, reaching the highest record ever.
As we know, many companies set high standards and requirements for job seekers. A master’s degree is often a must when they advertise for new employees, which means fresh college graduates cannot find a good job. As a result, in order to broaden horizons and learn more professional skills, more and more young people choose to stay on campus for further education. They believe taking a post-graduate course is a good way to enrich their knowledge and make themselves better equipped for a promising future. In other words, they hope to look for a better-paid job in a competitive society with a higher degree.
4.
【2012平顶山期末】假如你是王霞，你的美国朋友Ashley说他将在三月初来中国。请你根据下表提供的信息为他推荐两个旅游点。词数：120字左右。
地点山东青岛四川岷山
特色避暑胜地，以蓝色的大海，美丽的海滨闻名环境优雅，风景秀丽，山上名寺甚多，历史悠久
价格1000元500 元
时间5天4天
Dear Ashley,
______________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely
Wang Xia
【参考范文】
Dear Ashley,
I am glad to hear that you are coming to China at the beginning of March. I’d like to recommendQingdao and Minshan Mountain to you.
Qingdao is a beautiful coastal city and a wonderful place to spend summer. The climate there is very mild and can make you feel very relaxed and comfortable.
The other is Minshan Mountain. It is famous for its beautiful scenery and long history. There are many old famous temples there. If you are interested in climbing mountains and temples, it is definitely worth seeing.
As for the cost, a five-day tour around Qingdao may cost you 1,000 yuan, while a four-day tour ofMinshan Mountain could cost around 500 yuan.
I hope you have a good trip!
Yours sincerely
Wang Xia
5.
【2012桂林、防城港一次调研】
假设你是李华，你班来自美国的交流学生Arthur患病住院已有三周，请你用英文给他写封信，主要内容包括：
一询问病情，表示关切二介绍班级近期活动、学习等情况三表达祝愿
注意
1.词数120左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3.信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。
【参考范文】
6.
【2012·金华十校期末】 在现实生活中，许多父母亲的要求与子女的行为表现并未能达到一致。
请根据右边的图片，写一篇短文，内容包括：
1.描述漫画内容;
2.说出其中的寓意;
3.发表你的观点。
注意：
1.可适当增添内容，使文章层次分明，行文连贯。
2.字数120左右。
3.开头语已为你写好【不计入总字数】
As can often be seen in our daily life, many parents have expectations which are too high for their children to reach.In the picture, ____________________________________
7.
【2012·宝鸡一次质检】假如你是李华，你的美国网友Mr.Smith将来你所在的城市工作，曾发电子邮件希望你为他找一处合适的房子。你正好在淘房网站看到一份招租广告，觉得很符合Mr.Smith的要求，请你发份英文电子邮件给Mr.Smith介绍这套房子的情况，并征求他的意见。房子情况如下：(1)位于市中心商业区，交通便利，环境优美。(2)面积80平方米，宽敞明亮。(3)房间天然气、暖气、家具、空调等必备设施齐全。(4)房租价格合理，每月仅1000元。其房子位置和户型如图所示：
注意：
1、短文须写在答题卡的指定区域;
2、短文的词数不少于l00(不含已写好的部分)
3、内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯;
4、书写须清晰、工整;
5、邮件中不能体现本人真实信息。
Dear Mr.Smith,
I’m very glad to hear that you will come to work in our city.
8.
【2012·潍坊期末】
假设你是李华，你在读美国中学生Jack的博客时了解到他即将作为一名交换生来北京学习，希望能够寄宿在一名擅长英语的中学生家要里，以便更好地了解中图文化。请根据以下要点给Jack写一封电子邮件：
1.欢迎他来中国学习;
2. 介绍你个人情况;
3. 邀请他住在你家并愿意为他提供帮助。
注意：l. 词数120—150;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
9.
【2012·西安一次质检】假设你是李华，学校学英语社团将举办主题为“Live a low-carbon life”演讲比赛，你准备参赛，请你写一份100词以上的发言稿。
写作要点：
1.陈述理由：为什么要过低碳生活?
2.如何过低碳生活?提出至少三条建议。
3.倡议同学们过低碳生活。
要求：
1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。
2.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。
3.书写需清晰，工整。
Hello everyone,
Thanks.
10.
【2012海淀期末】近期某网站就校车安全问题进行了一次社会调查，结果见下图。请根据图示用英语写一篇短文，介绍调查结果并谈谈你的看法，供有关部门参考。词数不少于60。
注意：1.文章的开头已经给出。
2.提示词：报废车abandoned vehicles
Recently, a survey on school buses has been conducted on a website
11.
【2012·江苏百校联考】
时间2011年10月13日
地点广东佛山
人物2岁的小悦悦(本名王悦)
事情1.相继被两车碾压;
2. 18名路人路过但都视而不见;
3. 最后一名拾荒阿姨上前施以援手。
结果1. 8天后，王悦去世;
2. 该事件引发网友广泛热议。
你的看法1. 。。。。
2. 。。。。
注意：1.可参考表格及图片，但不能照字面翻译。
2.词数150左右【开头已经写好，不计人总词数】。
3.参考词汇：小货车small van;拾荒collect scraps
On October 13，2011，two-year-old Wang Yue was playing on the street.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【解析】
本文是一篇记叙类看图写话。成为时要注意：1.时态：以过去时为主;2.人称：主要是第三人称;3. 内容要齐全;4. 注意语句之间的连贯，恰当使用连词。
【参考范文】
On October 13，2011，two-yearold Wang Yue was playing on the street. Unfortunately，a small van rushed by and ran over the young girl. But with brief stopping，the van continued driving. Then a second vehicle struck the girl again and rushed by without stopping. At least 18 people passed the seriously injured girl before finally an old woman who was later discovered to be making a living by collecting scraps came to her rescue. After 8 days of struggle in hospital，Wang Yue died and left us forever. The incident has stirred heated discussions both in and outsideChina.
Most people can't believe this incident should have happened in Guaiigdong，a place where China's economic reforms first began and a place which has powered the country's remarkable growth People have focused much on economic development，but they haven't paid enough attention to the promotion of morality. While we can't ignore the development of economy，we should offer a hand to those in need as well.
We should concentrate more on the education of morality and enforce laws to prevent similar incidents from happening again.
12.
【2012湖南四市九校联考】请你根据下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应该包括一下内容：
(1)这幅漫画描述了什么?
(2)这幅漫画想要告诉我们什么?
(3)请结合你的生活经历，发表你个人的看法。
(4)字数：150字左右。 词汇：温室：green house
【参考范文】
In our daily life, we children are just like the little flower, while our parents the greenhouse, wanting to help us deal with every difficulties. I still remember when wanted to go downtown to sell newspapers alone, my mum shook her head fiercely, saying: “Too dangerous, honey, in case you meet a cheater! You can manage it later.” But not until today have I known how to sell papers! Therefore, let us come to the practical world, enjoying sun as well as rain, parents. Only in this way can we grow healthy and strong!
13.
【2012·宁德质检】假如你是宁德市某中学高三(1)班班长，你得知，你班王伟同学昨天下午放学回家路上看到一位老奶奶摔倒在地，他立刻将她扶到安全地方，同时打电话给120，使老奶奶得到了及时救治。请你就此事倡仪全班同学向他学习。
注意：
1.倡议要点如下：(1)简述王伟事迹;(2)发表感想;(3)提出倡议;
2.可根据提示适当展开，以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;
4.词数：120左右。
参考词汇：美德virtue; 和谐的harmonious
Dear classmates,
I am more than pleased to share with you Wang Wei’s story.
That’s all. Thank you.
14.
【2012·银川一中模拟】央视发展改革
需要20%
太多广告损害
央视形象15%
许多广告与节目
主题无关20%
损失了许多
广告费 15%
快乐温馨
有创意30%
2012龙年央视春晚亮点之一，节目中无一广告植入。最近，某网站举行了一次题为“对今年春晚无广告植入的态度”的调查，请根据以下饼图【pie chart】所示信息用英语写一篇短文，并提出你自己的看法。
1.央视发展改革需要20%
2.太多广告损害央视形象15%
3.许多广告与节目主题无关20%
4.损失了许多广告费 15%
5.快乐温馨有创意30%
注意：
1.对所给提示，不要简单翻译，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
2.词数在120左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3.植入广告：product placement
The 2012 Spring Festival Gala has first set a unique record in the history of 30 years’ SFG--- no product placement in the programs, which accordingly has caused heated discussions.
书面表达：
The 2012 Spring Festival Gala has first set a unique record in the history of 30 years’ SFG--- no product placement in the programs, which accordingly has caused heated discussions.
As is shown in the pie chart,20% of the people surveyed think it is a great need for the reform of CCTV, which is of great benefit to the development of CCTV itself. On the contrary, due to too many product placements in the past , 15% hold the view that great harm has been done to the image of CCTV. And 30% of them consider it is full of happiness and creation ,which can set a good example for the next. Not related to the theme of the whole evening party , too many are meaningless, which takes up 20%.
However, about 15% of them think that not only will it bring advertisers a great loss but also the related departments.
As far as I am concerned, no product placement nowadays may be acceptable, and it should be advocated in the society .Most importantly, it should first take the audience’s feeling into account.
15.
【湖南省岳阳市云溪区一中2012届高三一模】假设你是李华，你的美国老师Miss Morgan要求你们明天下午去听一个美国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。请你根据以下要点，写一封短信向Miss Morgan请假。
内容要点：
* 表示歉意
* 理由：去机场接从法国回来的舅舅
* 询问：是否有录音，以便补听讲座
注意：
1.词数：100左右
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
Dear Miss Morgan,
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
16.
假如你叫李华，上周在去图书馆途中不慎丢失钱包、身份证等财物。正当你十分焦急之时，接到学校学生会通知，称英国外教Miss Johnson拾到你的钱包并上交学校，让你速去认领。请你对此给Miss Johnson写一封感谢信，感谢她拾金不昧的精神。
注意：1.信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词汇。
2.可根据内容要点适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译。
3.词数100左右。
Dear Miss Johnson,
I’m Li Hua, a student of No. 1 Middle School.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Miss Johnson,
I’m Li Hua, a student of No. 1 Middle School. I am writing this letter to thank you for returning my wallet, ID card and so on.
On my way home to the library last week, I lost my bag due to my carelessness. In the bag were my wallet with some money, ID card and other documents. As you know, documents such as my ID card and student card are very important to me. I was very worried and even sleepless. I was really at a loss when I was informed to go to the Students’ Union and take back what I had lost, where I learned that it was you who picked up my bag and kindly handed it in timely.
It was such a pleasant surprise that I’d like to express my thanks to you. What a good example you have set for me to learn from!
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
17.
【2012·蚌埠质检】最近你校组织一次关于“高三学生心理减压问题”的英文演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿，简单
介绍一下高三学生目前的心理状况，并提出一些减压的建议。
注意：1.词数：120左右。
2.内容包括以上要点，亦可适当拓展。
3.开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and schoolmates，
It’S a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience with you of reducing stress from studies.
Thank you for listening.
18.
【2012·石家庄质检】 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Nancy要来你校任教，请你帮她找一住房。你根据报纸上的广告帮她找到了一套。请你参照以下信息，写封信向她介绍住房情况及周围的居住环境。
1.单元房，两室一厅，月租金1500元，家具齐全;
2.交通便捷，公交车站距住处100米左右;
3.附近的设施有：医院、商场、公园和电影院等。
注意：
1.字数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3.结束语已为你写好。
Dear Nancy，
Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear Nancy,
I am glad to know that you are coming to China and teaching in our school here.
I have found an apartment for you. It is a two-bedroom apartment with a living room and it is fully furnished. It is located in the city, close to the bus stop, which is about 100 meters away. The rent is 1,500 yuan per month. You will find it convenient and fun to live there. The hospital is just around the corner. A shopping mall, a movie theater, and a park are also very close to the apartment.
It is a nice apartment and should suit your needs well. If you have any questions, please let me know.
Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
19.
【2012·宁波八校测试】请你以“The World is Getting Smaller”为题，写一篇短文。
要点：1. 我们都感觉到现在的世界变得越来越小。
2. 分析这种感觉的原因。
注意：词数100-120。
20.
【2012苏北四市调研】下面这幅图表是中国某城市在过去三十年间人们出行方式的情况统计，请根据你对这幅图表的理解用英语写一篇短文。
你的短文应包含以下内容：
1.根据所给图表简要描述人们出行方式的变化趋势;
2.分析导致图表中人们出行方式变化的可能原因：
3.从环保和健康等角度谈谈你自己的看法。【至少两点】
注意：
1可参照图表中文字及F面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。
2.词数150词左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3.文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
With the development of economy, people's traveling ways have changed a lot.
21.
【2012 山东实验中学模拟】假如你是中学生李华。你的外籍教师Tracy已经于上个月回到了美国。请用英语给她写一封电子邮件，内容如下：
1、表达对她的思念;
2、对她给予你的帮助表示感谢;
3、邀请她在方便时再来中国。
注意：1、可适当添加细节使文章连贯;字数：100。
2、信的开头和结尾已给出。
【参考范文】
22.
【2012淮南一模】
One possible version：
Nowadays it’s a common phenomenon that parents drive their children to school and back home, which causes a heated discussion. A survey has just been conducted about it, and findings are as follows.
We can see the supporters believe that more valuable time can be saved for students to get enough sleep , and children can also rest or have meals comfortably in their own cars. What’s more important, they consider it reasonable just for the sake of children’s safety. Meanwhile, it can offer more chances for parents to communicate with their children.
However, other people hold different opinions. They believe that it results in more traffic jams. Besides, driving kids to and from school will undoubtedly add to the parents’ burdens in aspects like time, energy and expenses. Still, in the long term children may be more dependent on their parents, which does no good to them.
In my opinion, I agree that going to school by car is a better solution for young children, I don’t think it a good idea for older children. It would be better if they choose to cycle or walk to and from school instead of taking a car, which will definitely help them keep fit.
23.
【2012山西忻州期末】假定你是李华，你的朋友李明写信告诉你他因不善于交友而苦恼。请根据以下提示给他回信，提出建议。
提示：
1.友善、乐于助人; 2.多与他人交流; 3.多参加活动;……
注意:
1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当发挥，以使短文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：communicate (v.) 交流; activity (n.) 活动
Dear Li Ming,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re feeling worried for failing to make friends. Some tips below may be helpful to you.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【参考范文】
24.
【2012滨州北镇中学高三期末】In modern society, we should learn to share. Sharing is an effective way to enrich your life.
请结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就分享(sharing)这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。
注意：1)无须写标题, 除诗歌外，文体不限;
2)内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例;
3)文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
4)词数为120左右。
【参考范文】
Years of school life has taught me a lot of things, of which sharing is the most significant for me.
In fact, I didn’t realize its significance until I failed the mid-term exam last October, during which time I studied less hard. At first, I was addicted to reading some science fictions in and outside class and didn’t do any homework. As a result, I was less active in class and felt depressed. Then my teacher and classmates talked about my studies with me and I told them about my worries. Thus my anxiety was beginning to be reduced with their help and I regained confidence.
It is sharing with others rather than keeping my worries to myself that has relieved me of trouble and made my studies more efficient. (130 words)
25.
【2012唐山高三期末】现在，很多中学生每天长时间用耳机听音乐、学英语。你的英语笔友李平也是如此。最近他在来信中提到感觉头痛、注意力不集中、汜忆力减退。请你就此回信谈谈你的观点和建议。
写作要点：
1.简述过度使用耳机的现象;
2.分析过度使用耳机的危害;
3.提出你的建议。
注意：
1.要点齐全，可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯;
2.字数100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3.可能用到的词汇：耳机earphone
One Possible Version
Dear Li Ping,
I received your letter yesterday. Nowadays many students listen to music and learn English with earphones. As for your trouble with ears and bad memory, I’m afraid you spend too much time listening with earphones. In fact, listening to music while doing your lessons may result in less concentration on your study. Besides, the overuse of earphones does harm to your hearing. There are many ways we can enjoy music and learn English. For instance, a recorder or a radio may be a good choice. However, if you do need to use an earphone, you should rest your ears for at least ten minutes every hour but do not use it more than 2 hours a day. I hope things will get better soon.
Best wishes.
Yours, Lin Tao
26.
【2012贵州省五高三校联考】假如你是李华，你校下个月要举办第七届校园艺术节， 你将通过电子邮件告诉远在美国的外教Sandy。 要点如下：
时间：12月3号到5号
目的：丰富同学你的课余生活，展示自我，放松心情
主题：艺术让我们丰富
内容：歌咏比赛，乐器比赛，书画展
要求： 1. 字数100字左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇：艺术节 art festival 书法calligraphy
One possible version:
Dear Sandy,
Our school is going to hold an art festival from December 3rd to 5th. This festival is aimed at making our after-class life more colorful, providing opportunities of showing our talents and relaxing ourselves with the theme " Art Makes Us Rich".
At the festival, there will be singing contests and instrument playing contests as well, and a Chinese calligraphy and drawing exhibition will also be included. Now those who are to take part are busy preparing for it.
I'm looking forward to the coming of the festival and sincerely hope that the festival will be a great success.
Wish you were here!
Your student
27.
【2012温州八校联考】2011年一位用行动宣讲环保概念的年轻人“低碳哥(Low-carbon Brother)”在网上走红了。他的主要做法有：1.捡起废纸，用空白一面写字。2.不开灯看电视，还把电视亮度调到最低(minimum)。3.上班骑自行车，不开车等。
请根据以上提示，写一篇短文介绍低碳生活(生活作息时所耗用的能量要尽力减少，从而减低二氧化碳的排放量)并阐述自己对这种低碳生活的看法。
注意： 1. 对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2. 词数120左右。
【参考范文】
A young man called Low-Carbon Brother became a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests living a low-carbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reduce carbon dioxide in the air. For example, he always picks up some waste paper on the street and uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns down the brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. Besides, he goes to work by bike instead of driving.
Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a simple life with so many modern inventions around us. As far as I am concerned, I strongly support his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, he at least can enjoy a healthy life.
28.
【2012吉林期末】假定你是李华，得知你的好友王平现在高三学习非常紧张;父母期望高, 作业繁重，测试多，高考压力大等，他非常烦恼。请给他写一封信，给出你的建议，帮助他摆脱烦恼。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
字数要求：100词左右。
Dear Wang Ping,
I’ve learned that you are having much trouble in your life and study. ___________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li hua
Dear Wang Ping,
I’ve learned that you’re having much trouble in your life and study, which seriously affect your physical and mental well-being. I’m worried about that, so I’m writing to share with you some of my ideas.
First of all, it is good having heart-to-heart talks with your parents regularly, telling them you know the high expectations from them and you won’t fail them. Meanwhile, you’d better tell them not to push you too hard, which will lead to too much anxiety. Besides, it is advisable to spare some time to take some exercise to keep refreshed and energetic. However, what’s the most important is that you should always keep optimistic and confident. Please take my advice into consideration.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
29.
南安一中2012届高三年上学期期末最近，你校同学针对是否应该每天留家庭作业进行了讨论。讨论详情见下表。
请根据表格内容为你校的校刊写一篇英文报道，并表明你自己的看法。
赞同(占70%)不赞同(占30%)
理 由巩固课上所学内容减少与家人相处时间
增进记忆与理解减少参与其它活动的机会
提高时间管理与安排的能力身感疲乏，学习兴趣降低
注意：1.词数120字左右; 2.根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3.文章题目和开头已给出(不计入词数)。
Is daily homework necessary?
Recently our school students have had a discussion about whether it is necessary to have daily homework. Different students have different opinions.
Recently our school students have had a discussion about whether it is necessary to have daily homework. Different students have different opinions.
Seventy percent of the students are willing to accept daily homework.They think homework
helps them review and practice what has been taught in class.Besides，by doing daily homework,
students can better understand their lessons.Furthermore，their skills in managing time can also be improved through homework.
However, thirty percent of the students have different opinions. They believe homework reduces their amount of leisure time with their families，not to mention the time for other activities.With a lot of homework to do，students feel tired，and will gradually lose interest in their lessons.
In my opinion, daily homework is necessary, but it must be fit for a student’s ability.Also，the amount of homework should be limited，for a student’s all-around development is more important than anything else in his or her life. (153 words)
30.
【2012西城高三期末】
假设你是红星中学高二【1】班的学生李华。最近你班组织了一次活动，寻找身边的雷锋。请根据下图提示将此次活动情况记录下来，并以“Looking for Lei Feng”为题向你校英语报刊投稿。
注意：1.文章题目已为你写好。
2.词数不少于60。
Looking for Lei Feng
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专题25 书面表达
1.
2011年12月11日国务院法制办就我国校车安全条例草案征求意见稿正式全文公布，广纳民意。请你根据下列表格的内容为某英语网站写一篇短文。
出台的背景 ● 连续的事故;
● 社会的关注;
● 政府的重视;
……
出台的意义 ● 关爱生命;
● 稳定社会;
……
你的看法 (请考生根据自己的感想提出两至三点建议)
注意：
1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不能简单翻译。
2.词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
Legal Affairs Office of the State Council of China publicized the exposure draft of School Bus Safety Regulations on Dec. 11th, 2011 to collect public opinions. ______________________
___--- ___________
One possible version:
Legal Affairs Office of the State Council of China publicized the exposure draft of School Bus Safety Regulations on Dec. 12th, 2011 to collect public opinions.
During the past year, there have been several severe school bus accidents which claimed many young lives. These tragedies came as a shock to everyone, and they have aroused great concern among people from all walks of life. The publication of the draft regulations indicate that our government has realized how serious the situation is and that it is taking effective measures to ensure the safety of the school bus.
The draft regulations reflect a deep concern from our government as well as from the public about students’ lives. When put into effect, the regulations will surely help reduce the number of accidents and benefit schools and families as well. Also, they will be of vital importance in stabling the society.
Personally, I fully support the coming out of the regulations, and I sincerely hope that everyone in our society will obey the regulations. What’s more, the regulations should be strictly carried out. (153 words)
2.
【2012厦门质检】
【题目要求】
下面这幅图展现了小明在放学路上因公交车故障欲向路人借手机联系父母的情景。请根据你对这幅图的理解用英语写一篇短文向《中学生英文报·会热点栏目》投稿。
1.简要描述图片内容;
2.结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想。
注意：
1.可根据图片提示及内容要点进行适当发挥;
2.词数120左右。开头己经写好，不计入总词数。
【参考范文】 3.
【2012三明市联考】这幅漫画表现了高校考研大军为备战研究生考试去图书馆占座位的情形，据中国日报报道，今年研究生报考人数突破160万人， 再创历史新高，请写一篇英语短文，试分析促使越来越多大学毕业生选择考研的原因。
注意：1. 130词左右，开头已给，不计入总词数。
2. 注意语言的得体性、准确性、和连贯性。
参考词汇：job seekers求职者;
professional skills专业技能;
fierce competition激烈的竞争
【参考范文】
It’s reported in China Daily that more than 1.6 million people took the post-graduate entrance exam this year, reaching the highest record ever.
As we know, many companies set high standards and requirements for job seekers. A master’s degree is often a must when they advertise for new employees, which means fresh college graduates cannot find a good job. As a result, in order to broaden horizons and learn more professional skills, more and more young people choose to stay on campus for further education. They believe taking a post-graduate course is a good way to enrich their knowledge and make themselves better equipped for a promising future. In other words, they hope to look for a better-paid job in a competitive society with a higher degree.
4.
【2012平顶山期末】假如你是王霞，你的美国朋友Ashley说他将在三月初来中国。请你根据下表提供的信息为他推荐两个旅游点。词数：120字左右。
地点 山东青岛 四川岷山
特色 避暑胜地，以蓝色的大海，美丽的海滨闻名 环境优雅，风景秀丽，山上名寺甚多，历史悠久
价格 1000元 500 元
时间 5天 4天
Dear Ashley,
______________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely
Wang Xia
【参考范文】
Dear Ashley,
I am glad to hear that you are coming to China at the beginning of March. I’d like to recommend Qingdao and Minshan Mountain to you.
Qingdao is a beautiful coastal city and a wonderful place to spend summer. The climate there is very mild and can make you feel very relaxed and comfortable.
The other is Minshan Mountain. It is famous for its beautiful scenery and long history. There are many old famous temples there. If you are interested in climbing mountains and temples, it is definitely worth seeing.
As for the cost, a five-day tour around Qingdao may cost you 1,000 yuan, while a four-day tour of Minshan Mountain could cost around 500 yuan.
I hope you have a good trip!
Yours sincerely
Wang Xia
5.
【2012桂林、防城港一次调研】
假设你是李华，你班来自美国的交流学生Arthur患病住院已有三周，请你用英文给他写封信，主要内容包括：
一询问病情，表示关切二介绍班级近期活动、学习等情况三表达祝愿
注意
1.词数120左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3.信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。
【参考范文】
6.
【2012·金华十校期末】 在现实生活中，许多父母亲的要求与子女的行为表现并未能达到一致。
请根据右边的图片，写一篇短文，内容包括：
1.描述漫画内容;
2.说出其中的寓意;
3.发表你的观点。
注意：
1.可适当增添内容，使文章层次分明，行文连贯。
2.字数120左右。
3.开头语已为你写好【不计入总字数】
As can often be seen in our daily life, many parents have expectations which are too high for their children to reach.In the picture, ____________________________________
7.
【2012·宝鸡一次质检】假如你是李华，你的美国网友Mr.Smith将来你所在的城市工作，曾发电子邮件希望你为他找一处合适的房子。你正好在淘房网站看到一份招租广告，觉得很符合Mr.Smith的要求，请你发份英文电子邮件给Mr.Smith介绍这套房子的情况，并征求他的意见。房子情况如下：(1)位于市中心商业区，交通便利，环境优美。(2)面积80平方米，宽敞明亮。(3)房间天然气、暖气、家具、空调等必备设施齐全。(4)房租价格合理，每月仅1000元。其房子位置和户型如图所示：
注意：
1、短文须写在答题卡的指定区域;
2、短文的词数不少于l00(不含已写好的部分)
3、内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯;
4、书写须清晰、工整;
5、邮件中不能体现本人真实信息。
Dear Mr.Smith,
I’m very glad to hear that you will come to work in our city.
8.
【2012·潍坊期末】
假设你是李华，你在读美国中学生Jack的博客时了解到他即将作为一名交换生来北京学习，希望能够寄宿在一名擅长英语的中学生家要里，以便更好地了解中图文化。请根据以下要点给Jack写一封电子邮件：
1.欢迎他来中国学习;
2. 介绍你个人情况;
3. 邀请他住在你家并愿意为他提供帮助。
注意：l. 词数120—150;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
9.
【2012·西安一次质检】假设你是李华，学校学英语社团将举办主题为“Live a low-carbon life”演讲比赛，你准备参赛，请你写一份100词以上的发言稿。
写作要点：
1.陈述理由：为什么要过低碳生活?
2.如何过低碳生活?提出至少三条建议。
3.倡议同学们过低碳生活。
要求：
1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。
2.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。
3.书写需清晰，工整。
Hello everyone,
Thanks.
10.
【2012海淀期末】近期某网站就校车安全问题进行了一次社会调查，结果见下图。请根据图示用英语写一篇短文，介绍调查结果并谈谈你的看法，供有关部门参考。词数不少于60。
注意：1.文章的开头已经给出。
2.提示词：报废车abandoned vehicles
Recently, a survey on school buses has been conducted on a website
11.
【2012·江苏百校联考】
时间 2011年10月13日
地点 广东佛山
人物 2岁的小悦悦(本名王悦)
事情 1.相继被两车碾压;
2. 18名路人路过但都视而不见;
3. 最后一名拾荒阿姨上前施以援手。
结果 1. 8天后，王悦去世;
2. 该事件引发网友广泛热议。
你的看法 1. 。。。。
2. 。。。。
注意：1.可参考表格及图片，但不能照字面翻译。
2.词数150左右【开头已经写好，不计人总词数】。
3.参考词汇：小货车small van;拾荒collect scraps
On October 13，2011，two-year-old Wang Yue was playing on the street.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【解析】
本文是一篇记叙类看图写话。成为时要注意：1.时态：以过去时为主;2.人称：主要是第三人称;3. 内容要齐全;4. 注意语句之间的连贯，恰当使用连词。
【参考范文】
On October 13，2011，two-yearold Wang Yue was playing on the street. Unfortunately，a small van rushed by and ran over the young girl. But with brief stopping，the van continued driving. Then a second vehicle struck the girl again and rushed by without stopping. At least 18 people passed the seriously injured girl before finally an old woman who was later discovered to be making a living by collecting scraps came to her rescue. After 8 days of struggle in hospital，Wang Yue died and left us forever. The incident has stirred heated discussions both in and outside China.
Most people can't believe this incident should have happened in Guaiigdong，a place where China's economic reforms first began and a place which has powered the country's remarkable growth People have focused much on economic development，but they haven't paid enough attention to the promotion of morality. While we can't ignore the development of economy，we should offer a hand to those in need as well.
We should concentrate more on the education of morality and enforce laws to prevent similar incidents from happening again.
12.
【2012湖南四市九校联考】请你根据下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应该包括一下内容：
(1)这幅漫画描述了什么?
(2)这幅漫画想要告诉我们什么?
(3)请结合你的生活经历，发表你个人的看法。
(4)字数：150字左右。 词汇：温室：green house
【参考范文】
In our daily life, we children are just like the little flower, while our parents the greenhouse, wanting to help us deal with every difficulties. I still remember when wanted to go downtown to sell newspapers alone, my mum shook her head fiercely, saying: “Too dangerous, honey, in case you meet a cheater! You can manage it later.” But not until today have I known how to sell papers! Therefore, let us come to the practical world, enjoying sun as well as rain, parents. Only in this way can we grow healthy and strong!
13.
【2012·宁德质检】假如你是宁德市某中学高三(1)班班长，你得知，你班王伟同学昨天下午放学回家路上看到一位老奶奶摔倒在地，他立刻将她扶到安全地方，同时打电话给120，使老奶奶得到了及时救治。请你就此事倡仪全班同学向他学习。
注意：
1.倡议要点如下：(1)简述王伟事迹;(2)发表感想;(3)提出倡议;
2.可根据提示适当展开，以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;
4.词数：120左右。
参考词汇：美德virtue; 和谐的harmonious
Dear classmates,
I am more than pleased to share with you Wang Wei’s story.
That’s all. Thank you.
14.
【2012·银川一中模拟】 央视发展改革
需要20%
太多广告损害
央视形象15%
许多广告与节目
主题无关20%
损失了许多
广告费 15%
快乐温馨
有创意30%
2012龙年央视春晚亮点之一，节目中无一广告植入。最近，某网站举行了一次题为“对今年春晚无广告植入的态度”的调查，请根据以下饼图【pie chart】所示信息用英语写一篇短文，并提出你自己的看法。
1.央视发展改革需要20%
2.太多广告损害央视形象15%
3.许多广告与节目主题无关20%
4.损失了许多广告费 15%
5.快乐温馨有创意30%
注意：
1.对所给提示，不要简单翻译，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
2.词数在120左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3.植入广告：product placement
The 2012 Spring Festival Gala has first set a unique record in the history of 30 years’ SFG--- no product placement in the programs, which accordingly has caused heated discussions.
书面表达：
The 2012 Spring Festival Gala has first set a unique record in the history of 30 years’ SFG--- no product placement in the programs, which accordingly has caused heated discussions.
As is shown in the pie chart,20% of the people surveyed think it is a great need for the reform of CCTV, which is of great benefit to the development of CCTV itself. On the contrary, due to too many product placements in the past , 15% hold the view that great harm has been done to the image of CCTV. And 30% of them consider it is full of happiness and creation ,which can set a good example for the next. Not related to the theme of the whole evening party , too many are meaningless, which takes up 20%.
However, about 15% of them think that not only will it bring advertisers a great loss but also the related departments.
As far as I am concerned, no product placement nowadays may be acceptable, and it should be advocated in the society .Most importantly, it should first take the audience’s feeling into account.
15.
【湖南省岳阳市云溪区一中2012届高三一模】假设你是李华，你的美国老师Miss Morgan要求你们明天下午去听一个美国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。请你根据以下要点，写一封短信向Miss Morgan请假。
内容要点：
* 表示歉意
* 理由：去机场接从法国回来的舅舅
* 询问：是否有录音，以便补听讲座
注意：
1.词数：100左右
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
Dear Miss Morgan,
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
16.
假如你叫李华，上周在去图书馆途中不慎丢失钱包、身份证等财物。正当你十分焦急之时，接到学校学生会通知，称英国外教Miss Johnson拾到你的钱包并上交学校，让你速去认领。请你对此给Miss Johnson写一封感谢信，感谢她拾金不昧的精神。
注意：1.信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词汇。
2.可根据内容要点适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译。
3.词数100左右。
Dear Miss Johnson,
I’m Li Hua, a student of No. 1 Middle School.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Miss Johnson,
I’m Li Hua, a student of No. 1 Middle School. I am writing this letter to thank you for returning my wallet, ID card and so on.
On my way home to the library last week, I lost my bag due to my carelessness. In the bag were my wallet with some money, ID card and other documents. As you know, documents such as my ID card and student card are very important to me. I was very worried and even sleepless. I was really at a loss when I was informed to go to the Students’ Union and take back what I had lost, where I learned that it was you who picked up my bag and kindly handed it in timely.
It was such a pleasant surprise that I’d like to express my thanks to you. What a good example you have set for me to learn from!
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
17.
【2012·蚌埠质检】最近你校组织一次关于“高三学生心理减压问题”的英文演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿，简单
介绍一下高三学生目前的心理状况，并提出一些减压的建议。
注意：1.词数：120左右。
2.内容包括以上要点，亦可适当拓展。
3.开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and schoolmates，
It’S a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience with you of reducing stress from studies.
Thank you for listening.
18.
【2012·石家庄质检】 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Nancy要来你校任教，请你帮她找一住房。你根据报纸上的广告帮她找到了一套。请你参照以下信息，写封信向她介绍住房情况及周围的居住环境。
1.单元房，两室一厅，月租金1500元，家具齐全;
2.交通便捷，公交车站距住处100米左右;
3.附近的设施有：医院、商场、公园和电影院等。
注意：
1.字数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3.结束语已为你写好。
Dear Nancy，
Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear Nancy,
I am glad to know that you are coming to China and teaching in our school here.
I have found an apartment for you. It is a two-bedroom apartment with a living room and it is fully furnished. It is located in the city, close to the bus stop, which is about 100 meters away. The rent is 1,500 yuan per month. You will find it convenient and fun to live there. The hospital is just around the corner. A shopping mall, a movie theater, and a park are also very close to the apartment.
It is a nice apartment and should suit your needs well. If you have any questions, please let me know.
Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
19.
【2012·宁波八校测试】请你以“The World is Getting Smaller”为题，写一篇短文。
要点：1. 我们都感觉到现在的世界变得越来越小。
2. 分析这种感觉的原因。
注意：词数100-120。
20.
【2012苏北四市调研】下面这幅图表是中国某城市在过去三十年间人们出行方式的情况统计，请根据你对这幅图表的理解用英语写一篇短文。
你的短文应包含以下内容：
1.根据所给图表简要描述人们出行方式的变化趋势;
2.分析导致图表中人们出行方式变化的可能原因：
3.从环保和健康等角度谈谈你自己的看法。【至少两点】
注意：
1可参照图表中文字及F面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。
2.词数150词左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3.文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
With the development of economy, people's traveling ways have changed a lot.
21.
【2012 山东实验中学模拟】假如你是中学生李华。你的外籍教师Tracy已经于上个月回到了美国。请用英语给她写一封电子邮件，内容如下：
1、表达对她的思念;
2、对她给予你的帮助表示感谢;
3、邀请她在方便时再来中国。
注意：1、可适当添加细节使文章连贯;字数：100。
2、信的开头和结尾已给出。
【参考范文】
22.
【2012淮南一模】
One possible version：
Nowadays it’s a common phenomenon that parents drive their children to school and back home, which causes a heated discussion. A survey has just been conducted about it, and findings are as follows.
We can see the supporters believe that more valuable time can be saved for students to get enough sleep , and children can also rest or have meals comfortably in their own cars. What’s more important, they consider it reasonable just for the sake of children’s safety. Meanwhile, it can offer more chances for parents to communicate with their children.
However, other people hold different opinions. They believe that it results in more traffic jams. Besides, driving kids to and from school will undoubtedly add to the parents’ burdens in aspects like time, energy and expenses. Still, in the long term children may be more dependent on their parents, which does no good to them.
In my opinion, I agree that going to school by car is a better solution for young children, I don’t think it a good idea for older children. It would be better if they choose to cycle or walk to and from school instead of taking a car, which will definitely help them keep fit.
23.
【2012山西忻州期末】假定你是李华，你的朋友李明写信告诉你他因不善于交友而苦恼。请根据以下提示给他回信，提出建议。
提示：
1.友善、乐于助人; 2.多与他人交流; 3.多参加活动;……
注意:
1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当发挥，以使短文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：communicate (v.) 交流; activity (n.) 活动
Dear Li Ming,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re feeling worried for failing to make friends. Some tips below may be helpful to you.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【参考范文】
24.
【2012滨州北镇中学高三期末】In modern society, we should learn to share. Sharing is an effective way to enrich your life.
请结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就分享(sharing)这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。
注意：1)无须写标题, 除诗歌外，文体不限;
2)内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例;
3)文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
4)词数为120左右。
【参考范文】
Years of school life has taught me a lot of things, of which sharing is the most significant for me.
In fact, I didn’t realize its significance until I failed the mid-term exam last October, during which time I studied less hard. At first, I was addicted to reading some science fictions in and outside class and didn’t do any homework. As a result, I was less active in class and felt depressed. Then my teacher and classmates talked about my studies with me and I told them about my worries. Thus my anxiety was beginning to be reduced with their help and I regained confidence.
It is sharing with others rather than keeping my worries to myself that has relieved me of trouble and made my studies more efficient. (130 words)
25.
【2012唐山高三期末】现在，很多中学生每天长时间用耳机听音乐、学英语。你的英语笔友李平也是如此。最近他在来信中提到感觉头痛、注意力不集中、汜忆力减退。请你就此回信谈谈你的观点和建议。
写作要点：
1.简述过度使用耳机的现象;
2.分析过度使用耳机的危害;
3.提出你的建议。
注意：
1.要点齐全，可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯;
2.字数100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3.可能用到的词汇：耳机earphone
One Possible Version
Dear Li Ping,
I received your letter yesterday. Nowadays many students listen to music and learn English with earphones. As for your trouble with ears and bad memory, I’m afraid you spend too much time listening with earphones. In fact, listening to music while doing your lessons may result in less concentration on your study. Besides, the overuse of earphones does harm to your hearing. There are many ways we can enjoy music and learn English. For instance, a recorder or a radio may be a good choice. However, if you do need to use an earphone, you should rest your ears for at least ten minutes every hour but do not use it more than 2 hours a day. I hope things will get better soon.
Best wishes.
Yours, Lin Tao
26.
【2012贵州省五高三校联考】假如你是李华，你校下个月要举办第七届校园艺术节， 你将通过电子邮件告诉远在美国的外教Sandy。 要点如下：
时间：12月3号到5号
目的：丰富同学你的课余生活，展示自我，放松心情
主题：艺术让我们丰富
内容：歌咏比赛，乐器比赛，书画展
要求： 1. 字数100字左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇：艺术节 art festival 书法calligraphy
One possible version:
Dear Sandy,
Our school is going to hold an art festival from December 3rd to 5th. This festival is aimed at making our after-class life more colorful, providing opportunities of showing our talents and relaxing ourselves with the theme " Art Makes Us Rich".
At the festival, there will be singing contests and instrument playing contests as well, and a Chinese calligraphy and drawing exhibition will also be included. Now those who are to take part are busy preparing for it.
I'm looking forward to the coming of the festival and sincerely hope that the festival will be a great success.
Wish you were here!
Your student
27.
【2012温州八校联考】2011年一位用行动宣讲环保概念的年轻人“低碳哥(Low-carbon Brother)”在网上走红了。他的主要做法有：1.捡起废纸，用空白一面写字。2.不开灯看电视，还把电视亮度调到最低(minimum)。3.上班骑自行车，不开车等。
请根据以上提示，写一篇短文介绍低碳生活(生活作息时所耗用的能量要尽力减少，从而减低二氧化碳的排放量)并阐述自己对这种低碳生活的看法。
注意： 1. 对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2. 词数120左右。
【参考范文】
A young man called Low-Carbon Brother became a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests living a low-carbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reduce carbon dioxide in the air. For example, he always picks up some waste paper on the street and uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns down the brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. Besides, he goes to work by bike instead of driving.
Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a simple life with so many modern inventions around us. As far as I am concerned, I strongly support his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, he at least can enjoy a healthy life.
28.
【2012吉林期末】假定你是李华，得知你的好友王平现在高三学习非常紧张;父母期望高, 作业繁重，测试多，高考压力大等，他非常烦恼。请给他写一封信，给出你的建议，帮助他摆脱烦恼。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
字数要求：100词左右。
Dear Wang Ping,
I’ve learned that you are having much trouble in your life and study. ___________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li hua
Dear Wang Ping,
I’ve learned that you’re having much trouble in your life and study, which seriously affect your physical and mental well-being. I’m worried about that, so I’m writing to share with you some of my ideas.
First of all, it is good having heart-to-heart talks with your parents regularly, telling them you know the high expectations from them and you won’t fail them. Meanwhile, you’d better tell them not to push you too hard, which will lead to too much anxiety. Besides, it is advisable to spare some time to take some exercise to keep refreshed and energetic. However, what’s the most important is that you should always keep optimistic and confident. Please take my advice into consideration.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
29.
南安一中2012届高三年上学期期末最近，你校同学针对是否应该每天留家庭作业进行了讨论。讨论详情见下表。
请根据表格内容为你校的校刊写一篇英文报道，并表明你自己的看法。
赞同(占70%) 不赞同(占30%)
理 由 巩固课上所学内容 减少与家人相处时间
增进记忆与理解 减少参与其它活动的机会
提高时间管理与安排的能力 身感疲乏，学习兴趣降低
注意：1.词数120字左右; 2.根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3.文章题目和开头已给出(不计入词数)。
Is daily homework necessary?
Recently our school students have had a discussion about whether it is necessary to have daily homework. Different students have different opinions.
Recently our school students have had a discussion about whether it is necessary to have daily homework. Different students have different opinions.
Seventy percent of the students are willing to accept daily homework.They think homework
helps them review and practice what has been taught in class.Besides，by doing daily homework,
students can better understand their lessons.Furthermore，their skills in managing time can also be improved through homework.
However, thirty percent of the students have different opinions. They believe homework reduces their amount of leisure time with their families，not to mention the time for other activities.With a lot of homework to do，students feel tired，and will gradually lose interest in their lessons.
In my opinion, daily homework is necessary, but it must be fit for a student’s ability.Also，the amount of homework should be limited，for a student’s all-around development is more important than anything else in his or her life. (153 words)
30.
【2012西城高三期末】
假设你是红星中学高二【1】班的学生李华。最近你班组织了一次活动，寻找身边的雷锋。请根据下图提示将此次活动情况记录下来，并以“Looking for Lei Feng”为题向你校英语报刊投稿。
注意：1.文章题目已为你写好。
2.词数不少于60。
Looking for Lei Feng
【参考范文】
书面表达
教案课件是每个老师工作中上课需要准备的东西，大家在认真准备自己的教案课件了吧。我们制定教案课件工作计划，可以更好完成工作任务！你们清楚教案课件的范文有哪些呢？小编特地为您收集整理“书面表达”，欢迎您阅读和收藏，并分享给身边的朋友！
2010高考二轮复习英语教案专题二十一书面表达
书面表达的体裁、题材、情景具有多样性、实用性。近年来，书面表达取材比较广泛，内容较为丰富，题材多为日常生活和一般交往所涉及的内容。体裁包括记叙文、说明文、应用文和议论文，命题的方式多种多样，主要有文字提示、图画提示和图表提示三种。
考试大纲对高考英语书面表达的要求是“要求考生根据所给情景，用英语写一篇100-150个单词左右的短文。情景包括目的，对象，时间，地点，内容等等，提供情景的形式有图画，图表，提纲等”；要求考生能：1．准确使用语法和词汇；2．使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思；英语课程标准中关于高考写作的要求为：1．能根据用文字及图表提供的信息写出短文或报告；2．能写出语意连贯且结构完整的短文，叙述事情或表达观点和态度；3．能在写作中做到文体规范、语句通顺。
综观近几年的高考英语发展势态：书面表达旨在训练学生对所学语言知识的实践应用，特别是测试学生的语言交际能力和语言知识的活用能力的必考题型，也是高考中重要且难度较大的题型，所占分值为25-30分，要在30分钟内写出80－100个词左右的短文。历年来，高考英语书面表达主要有以下特点：
一是文体的常用性，即其所涉及的文体有：1.议论文，以摆事实，讲道理的方式表述观点，事物，方法的原则，须具备论点，论据，论证三大要素；2.说明文，用说明作主要表达方式来说明某个事物的形状，性质，功能或形成原因，发生发展过程等；3.应用文，有书信，日记，口头同志，便条，广告，启示，请柬，贺卡，海报等形式，其中信的形式有包括求职信，感谢信，商务信函等；4.记叙文,以记人，叙事为主要内容，以叙述为主要表达方式的一种文体，包括介绍人物地生平事迹，记叙事情发展过程，说明前因后果等。
二是题材的熟悉性，既书面表达的取材主要涉及中学生所体验到的日常生活。
三是内容的控制性，它通过图画，表格，要点等来限定考生的写作内容，使得考生在写作时自由发挥的余地较小。
四是题型的稳定性，由上所述，近年来上海考试的命题形式主要以图画，表格形式出现，有时以提纲，要点形式出现。
五是要求的渐进性，既高考对书面表达的要求在逐年提高，由原来的要求写对，到以前的要求写好，再到现在的要求写出文采，使用高级词汇和复杂结构等，并对由此而产生的错误采取了宽容的态度。
以30分作文为例，一般评分标准：
A．内容充实，主题突出，覆盖所有知识要点，应用了较多较高级的词汇和语法结构，有效得使用了语句间的连接成分，结构紧凑，给25-30分。
B．内容较充实，能表述作文要求，语法结构和词汇能满足内容要求，有一些错误但不影响全文理解，全文连贯，给21-25分。
C．内容基本充实，尚能表述作文要求，句子简单但能表达内容要求，给15-20分。
D．漏掉或未能写清主要内容，有些内容与主题无关，语言错误影响了读者对写作内容的理解，缺少连贯性，信息未能清楚地传达给读者，给10-15分。
E．明显遗漏主要内容，严重离题，不知所云，字迹潦草，给1-10分。
从高考评卷及平时测验题，学生在做书面表达题时，得分率较低，卷面普遍存在的缺点：1）文不对题（文体格式不规范）；2）离题太远（抓不到要点，该说的不说，不该说的说的太多）；3）词不达意（有的甚至用汉语标注或留空）；4）病句太多（时态、语态、人称、数等语法）；5）卷面不工整（字迹潦草、乱涂改、添插箭头满篇飞）。如何指导学生克服上述缺点，少犯错误，提高该题的得分率？因此教师在引导考生复习备考突破该题型时要注意如下几点：
一、遵循循序渐进原则
对书面表达题型的训练要从简单到复杂的顺序进行，可以从一些简单的看图作文-记叙文着手；可以从单句-复杂句着手；可以从单段-多段；从不分段到分段等着手对学生进行训练。
二、点拨技巧，事半功倍
分析高考要求和高考阅卷情况，在平时的训练中要让考生养成良好的做题习惯如：
1.养成审题的习惯
1）审题时要明确体裁，掌握格式
学生的书面表达往往存在不讲究逻辑、文体和格式的现象，所以很有必要让学生明确常见的几种文体和格式。就中学阶段，最常见的文体有：应用文（书信、通知、日记、便条）、记叙文和说明文。近十年NMET书面表达内容题材不外乎上述三种文体。我们知道：中学教材的内容，涵盖了所有体裁，教师应该结合课文，分类按题材归纳，详细介绍并具体指导学生掌握各种文体的写作特点及格式。若是记叙文，要弄清事件的时间、地点、人物、原因和结果；若是说明文，要了解说明的主旨以及说明的顺序；若是以图画形式提供情景，即看图作文，首先应看懂每幅图的意思，还要弄懂几幅图之间的关系。
2）抓住要点，一一对应。
能否找出覆盖主要内容所有要点是得高分的关键，高考的评分标准一般分五个档次，要点越齐全，得高分的可能性就越大；反之，若欠缺要点或描述与表达内容要点无关的，得分当然低。一般要求找出5--6个要点，可先用汉语或用keywords列出，
2.养成谋篇布局，谨慎用词的习惯
1）谋篇布局是审题的结果，也是写好文章的关键。一篇优秀的文章都是层次分明，思路清晰，要求达到此标准，必须依据提示进行分段构思，合理布局。
2）选词造句，点石成金。
书面表达要求用100词左右写出包含5--6个要点的短文。从近几年高考英语参考答案看，一般都以8－10个句子组成一篇文章。若用较少于8句话来表达，则句子容易复杂冗长，容易失控；若用多于10句话来表述，则句子零乱与琐碎，文章缺乏整体感。且大多数用简单句，少数用并列句和复合句。
因此，在教学中首先应对简单句五种基本句型以及“therebe存在结构”等进行强化训练，然后对并列句、复合句进行适当的训练，使学生获得了扎实的句子结构基础知识，从而从根本上为迅速提高书面表达能力打下了扎实的基础；在平时训练中提醒学生在做题时，要善于避生就熟，当遇到某一难以直接表达的要点时，不妨变通一下，进行“曲线”表达。
3.养成合理安排，联句成文的习惯
书面表达不仅仅是“句子堆积”,要注意文章的连贯性和逻辑性。如何使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。用好各种连接词，对写出一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要。要求学生按照合理的顺序或按一定的写作线索选用适应的连接词，将句子连珠成串，使各句连成结构紧凑、层次分明、语义连贯的短文。因此，在引导考生复习备考时，教师可介绍一些常用连接成分。如下面表格中是写作中经常用到的一些连接词：
4.养成检查修改，卷面整洁的习惯
做书面表达时，力求用词准确。作文写完后应认真阅读，检查文章中的拼写和标点错误、语法错误、逻辑错误等；检查词数是否符合要求；检查内容要点是否全面，删繁就简，使表达更加精炼，措词更加恰当。定稿后应认真誊写，要求书写规范、正确、美观，并保持卷面整洁。从参加高考阅卷者都有这样的体会：要在比较短的时间里，阅读完一篇作文，当看到那些字迹潦草卷面不整洁的，心情就特别烦，评分可能比想象的要低；而看到那些书写规范、卷面整洁的，就倍感爽心悦目，有可能得到比较高的分数，这也是情理之中的事情。因此，在训练时，学生要养成书写工整、规范，卷面整洁的习惯，在做高考题时，才不致书写潦草、卷面不整洁，从而导致丢失本来不该丢的分。
